Why do humans feel the need to create
beings who possess qualities that are larger than life or apogee? Beowulf is
the quintessential version of this rule, he was created to show the generations
what a proper man should strive to be like. He was everything a Viking only
dreamed to be in that day and age, just as Steve jobs is portrayed to our age. Both
are presented as the pinnacle of success, they have achieved all that they can
from the culture and are now “heroes” of their time. Although Steve jobs is no
high flying, brawny Viking, and Beowulf is no literary genius, they both
represent exactly what their cultures expect of their kind.
Now of course Steve jobs is not
literary character, but I thing we are all characters in the eyes of the world.
We can all be portrayed in a good light or bad and for that reason Steve’s
accomplishments can be sked to be more grandiose then in reality. Furthermore who’s
to say Beowulf wasn’t a really person, we have no proof to say otherwise. But I
think we can all agree that some of his story was blown out of proportions. Both
men were subject to that pressure of living in lies where as a normal man might
never have to experience the lies of others. More over these men almost didn’t have
a choice, no doubt they had great achievements, but once an individual does
something great they very often become myths
In the case of Beowulf he was
created to show men how to act and how to be men. Steve on the other hand was a
symbol that no matter the circumstances anyone can achieve high and make millions.
In that sense the Vikings glory in battle and honor is our present day money,
both were revered and both are coveted. See we need goal to strive toward, it
is rare that people can head into the unknown and achieve success without a
goal. Beowulf and Steve Jobs are the goals for our culture, we all want to head
to success like them and so they represent everything we want and need in our
life to feel complete.
Jobs and Beowulf might not be
literary characters but they have both become literary legends because their
culture shaped them into the god of that time. Humans need heroes because we
are goal oriented creatures and those heroes and their actions are what we
strive to emulate.
After reading a few essays comparing Beowulf to super heroes (hey I did too, guilty), this was quite different to the ones I read so far. I mean this in a good way though, it was quite enjoyable to read. It's nice to see someone else think of a hero differently, and proves how we all have our own definitions, and how there are different types of the "hero". Nice job
ReplyDeleteI agree with Sam on this one. Its nice to see a different perspective on this essay prompt, and see your views and insight on each character. My only qualm with your essay is what I think are a few grammar mistakes, such as the use of "except" in the first paragraph, and the use of the phrase "achieve high" in the third. In my opinion they should be "expect" and something like "greatness" or "high status" respectively.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Sam and Edmond, but overall, I like your comparison! Your comparison has given me another perspective on Beowulf. I like your comparison that honor and glory is like our present day money! I would have never thought of that! Great job on your essay!
ReplyDeleteI was really into the fact that you talked about Steve Jobs! Nice one. But I got confused on the second to last paragraph when you switched the topic about viking for some odd reason.I think you should have mentioned some of that info in your thesis. But other than that I really liked it. Good job Shane!
ReplyDeleteHey Shane, thanks for the feedback on my essay. I'm going to return the favor.
ReplyDeleteStraight off the bat, amazing use of vocab and solid introductory paragraph with well-stated thesis. You should have listed the different literary techniques used in Beowulf to advance what Beowulf represented. There is also some grammatical errors here and there but overall an extremely solid essay.
Shane, your choice of heroes is inspired and clearly an attention-getter. Good thinking. And, it has often been said that "fiction is the lie that tells the truth." With that in mind, most of us have come to know Jobs as a character in print/visual media, so in addition to discussing the values of the culture in which he lived, it becomes important to think about the tools/techniques authors used to create him as a character. Bring him into the conversation about Beowulf instead of the other way around (as in the first sentence of concluding paragraph).
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