Essay comments from Shane Hunter
I liked the essay the use of an arch to build up your
argument worked really well. The point that you made about how Bernard was
brainwashing kids with beliefs he himself did not hold was the strongest point
in my opinion
Rebecca Aldrich (http://rebeccaaldrich.blogspot.com/2014/02/brave-new-essay.html#comment-form
)
The first 3 paragraph essay I read and it was a bad thing
you condense your point into a concise message. This working better than a
drawn out dissertation so good job.
Jacob Hoffman (http://aplit2013-2014.blogspot.com/2014/02/a-slightly-cowardly-new-essay.html#comment-form
)
Very nice essay, good analysis of the characters
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